enne📚 reviewed She Commands Me and I Obey by Ann Leckie (Imperial Radch, #0.6)
She Commands Me and I Obey
3 stars
This is a short story in the Ancillary universe that gives a small piece of Breq's history in the Itran Tetrarchy, which is alluded to in other books. These tetrarchs use a religious ball game (which seems an explicit reference to Mayan ball games) to determine who will be the next leader, with the opposing captain being executed.
I think this would be a pretty good short story in its own right about backroom politics mixing with religion. But, in my mind, it suffers from including Breq, who appears too large on the page and we learn too few details about. I came into this with expectations that this would fill in a piece of Breq's past, but the extra details we learn are incredibly scant. I wonder if this would have been more satisfying if it had been stretched out to a novella with an additional point of view …
This is a short story in the Ancillary universe that gives a small piece of Breq's history in the Itran Tetrarchy, which is alluded to in other books. These tetrarchs use a religious ball game (which seems an explicit reference to Mayan ball games) to determine who will be the next leader, with the opposing captain being executed.
I think this would be a pretty good short story in its own right about backroom politics mixing with religion. But, in my mind, it suffers from including Breq, who appears too large on the page and we learn too few details about. I came into this with expectations that this would fill in a piece of Breq's past, but the extra details we learn are incredibly scant. I wonder if this would have been more satisfying if it had been stretched out to a novella with an additional point of view for Breq so that we could see her thoughts.
I will say it is also weird for this story to give pronouns for Breq in non-Radchaii language and to have Her-Breath-Contains-The-Universe describe Breq's body. On the other hand, what is gender to a several thousand year old part of a spaceship that used to have many bodies. Breq even says that she's "gotten used to be being called by whatever pronoun seems appropriate to the speaker", so I don't know that I'd read much into this. I was just surprised.
