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Enum & Valerie

enumeration@kirja.casa

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@vivavaleria@eldritch.cafe on the mammooth site. Reading mostly wlw rom-coms, with the occasional exceptions. I try to rotate languages, but it isn't really easy to find queer romance books in other languages than English. Reviews and comments usually in the same language as the book.

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reviewed Divine Rivals by Rebecca Ross

Rebecca Ross: Divine Rivals (Hardcover, 2023, Magpie (HarperCollinsPublishers))

Two rivals. Two stories. Two hearts. One fate.

When two rival journalists find love through …

I'm conflicted

In the beginning I thought this book was simply amazing. The story consists of three parts that could each stand on their own, with great ideas. With big life-changing events separating the parts. Some original mythology. And an absolutely enchanting writing style.

But then again, this is not just a romance story, but also a war story. With war logic, war values and war events, inspired by WW1. And I really don't understand why people like to fill their leasure time and literature with such horrible stuff. Yes daddy, there's nothing more romantic than trenches full of bodies, and then the sudden introduction of chemical weapons.

Nonetheless, it could still have been a great book if the author had chosen the easy way of writing a predictable happy end. Instead she chose one you just cannot predict, not even in your wildest phantasies, not even after reading this review. And …

Torrey Peters: Detransition, Baby (hardcover, 2021, One World)

A whipsmart debut about three women--transgender and cisgender--whose lives collide after an unexpected pregnancy forces …

this book is so trans!

This book actually consists of many little stories, and all of them are so trans, i feel seen. One of the stories is in the foreground, stretched over the entire book, while the others are told as anecdotes from the characters' past. I liked many things in the book. But it is a slow read, nothing to consume in one weekend.

Sophie Gonzales: Perfect on Paper (Paperback, 2021, Hachette Children's Group)

Darcy Phillips has a secret. Even Brooke, her best friend (who she hopes could be …

Dear Locker 89,

Darcy really is just my kind of disaster bisexual, and she has a transfem sister who is just precious <3 When reading the promo summaries, I immediately assumed she'd get the girl in the end, but this ending is just as glorious. All thumbs up!

Ruth Ware: It Girl (2023, Simon & Schuster, Limited)

It was Hannah who found April's body ten years ago. It was Hannah who didn't …

So many plot twists

Every time I had plausible ideas about who the murderer might be, i had to stop myself because there were still so many pages left. There was no lack of tension.

One point deduction because a girl went back to the guy who literally hunted her, and who is suddenly portrayed as a hero and saviour. The straights really aren't okay.

Adiba Jaigirdar: Dos and Donuts of Love (2023, Hachette Children's Group)

The ex she still has feelings for. An exciting new crush. And the competition of …

Adiba Jaigirdar never disappoints

This book is full of puns, full of delicious baking goods, and full of wonderful people with character development during the story. And there isn't a single person-walks-into-wrong-situation-and-jumps-into-conclusions plot antipattern, the queen of YA WLW romance doesn't need that.

Taleen Voskuni: Sorry, Bro (2023, Penguin Publishing Group)

An Armenian-American woman rediscovers her roots and embraces who she really is in this vibrant …

Cute, but I'm missing more story and tension

What I liked: All the Armenian culture references, and the proverbs at the beginning of each chapter! That's so cool!

What I found boring: The tension curve is missing. The romance story is pretty straightforward, step by step without fallbacks, and at about 50% they're a couple and I asked myself "the story is already over, why are there so many more pages, oh no, please don't do a person-jumps-into-wrong-situation-and-jumps-to-conclusions" and well, what followed was a person-jumps-into-wrong-situation-and-jumps-to-conclusions.

Colson Whitehead: Harlem Shuffle (Paperback, 2021, Random House Large Print)

To his customers and neighbours on 125th Street, Ray Carney is an upstanding salesman of …

Colson Whitehead really loves character design

... and it's the best thing about the book. There's not really a classic tension arc. The book consists of three smaller stories, in different years, slightly interwoven. But the cool thing is not really the three major stories. It's how every single side character has some kind of backstory, smaller or larger, and Colson Whitehead tells you about all of them, sometimes leading to several nested layers of time in the narration. Those little ones are the stories that really make this book a great read.

Sophie Gonzales: Never Ever Getting Back Together (2022, St. Martin's Press)

Revenge is a dish best served on live TV.

Eighteen-year-old Maya's cheating ex Jordy is …

Douchebag gets dumped

Very entertaining romcom story where two absolutely gorgeous women get to dump their constantly lying douchebag ex on public television, while head-over-heals falling for each other. The book kept me up all night and didn't let me sleep. Another plus: The author invented a conlang for this (Chalonian). Minus: It's not used very much, and probably it's not designed out that well.

Kalynn Bayron: This Poison Heart (Paperback, 2021, BLOOMSBURY)

To break an ancient curse she must let her power bloom.

Briseis has a gift. …

Bri is so precious

Queer black girl with two moms can do plant magic and poisons, falls in love with a beautiful 300-years old immortal while navigating her own insecurities about friendship and about her ancestors, while solving the riddle of her millenia-old family history tied deeply with Greek mythology and poison botanics? Yeah how to not love this.

One minus point for the scene where Alec can suddenly translate ancient greek from 400 BC on-the-fly but needs an "ancient phoneme table" for it. Honestly, if you have the skill to pull this off, you don't need a phoneme table. And if you need a phoneme table, you definitely don't have the skill to translate texts on-the-fly. (I'm just being pedantic here, it's a great read).

Andrea Mosqueda: Just Your Local Bisexual Disaster (2022, Feiwel & Friends)

In this voice-driven debut YA novel, Maggie Gonzales has to choose between three possible dates—her …

Very bisexual. Very amusing. Very cliché. I feel seen in my disastrosity.

What's disturbing though, is all the coercive mononormativity in the book. Not only is dating them all not seen as an option, but the protagonist is punished for having had feelings for three people in the first place, and agrees with it, talks herself into believing she didn't actually have the feelings, when it's clear she did. This is disappointing, specifically because other aspects of amatonormativity are deconstructed very well.

Abdulrazak Gurnah: Afterlives (2021, Bloomsbury Publishing Plc)

While he was still a little boy, Ilyas was stolen from his parents by the …

The book tells the life stories of a hand full of people in Eastern Africa (mostly what is now Tansania), stretched over more than 100 years. Their lives intertwine, it's written from different perspectives, and they're affected by world events in different ways. There's not really much tension in the story - but it's not boring either, it's a nice read. Though I found it a bit hard to imagine how old all the people were at any given time, because the book stretches over many decades. People are born, they age, have a life and eventually they die.

Casey McQuiston: One Last Stop (Paperback, 2021, St. Martin's Griffin)

For cynical twenty-three-year-old August, moving to New York City is supposed to prove her right: …

So fucking gay, and there was so much representation of so many kinds and examples of queerness and queer community and queer history. And I loved the writing, all the hilarious little details and comments, all these amazing misfit characters with their flaws that you just have to fall in love with - it's just very rewarding to read. Content warning for all the queermisic and racist violence in Subway Girl's previous life though.

There are some details though that I can't stop wondering about. First of all, how long is the distance between the subway station on the Q??? Judging from all the things that happen on the train between the stations, there must be several kilometers O.O Second, why on earth would anybody donate and give charity to a restaurant owner, who's never there and doesn't work, just to keep his profit running, and even make him the …